Self critque

The research I apply was mostly from personal give with my daughters condition as well as information I researched online. I feel Like I used a lot of discipline and my classmates got a lot from It also. 2. Organization I attempted to keep my show organized In a way that I could convey my legal transfer both In a emotional and Informative way. I used somewhat of a chronological order when It came to explaining the events In my daughters life however I do feel that I caked a bit In organization. . Introduction The attention getter I used was Just me lecturinging about(predicate)(predicate) why each one of us was taking the cadence to talk about something were passionate about and how my choice was a bit assorted than many others my age. I believe it was effective in setting the tone for the notification. I did present the main points of speech but it wasnt until after I introduced the subject. 4. Body I feel I presented the information in a logical way and was able to ke ep e reallything together with the thesis.Since the topic of my speech/presentation was about my daughter, my original fear was to lose track into other subject since I felt I could talk forever about her. I did narrow it down to the main points keeping everything relevant to the thesis. 5. evidence I closed my presentation with the title of my speech which was, A infinitesimal light shines a long way. I felt it conveyed an Copernican message of never giving up and persevering in life, which is relatable in many situations to many people.I ended my speech with short video and my final exam words to review what was s incite during the entire speech, so it was clear that my presentation was over. 6. Transitions I used transitions mostly when I was transitioning between ideas during my speech. I move to firstly start with the idea of the subject and then introduce It completely. Although I did feel my transitions were a bit rough, it is something I need to work on. 7. opthalmic A d I worked very hard on my visual aid and felt that It helped convey my speech tenfoldI think I would use the same method of presenting any other speech because I felt hat using a Powering presentation Is one of the better(p) ways of visually showing your audience what you want to talk about. 8. give tongue to When It came to timing, I wanted everything to sound natural and sincere so I TLD want to rush. Having used this method, I believe I went over my time Limit, which will be something I will have to work on. 9. pitching Initially I was very nervous, so I started speaking very quickly, but as I progressed along, my speed slowed down because I became well-heeled with my audience.I audience, which in the end helped a lot. 0. Practice I rehearsed my presentation some(prenominal) times with my family and classmate Carmen. I feel like getting their feedback helped a lot with condensing UN-useful information, as well as adding better and unavoidable points to my speech that I had not noticed or already had.